Ordinary DAYsby ~absinthFenix

Photography / Street

*sights...nothing much, just an ordinary day. Going from New Belgrade, october cold day in june, god damn rain, at least half of me lost somewhere in the song by Vanessa Carlton...

And I liked the atmosphere on the photo.

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Just a day,
Just an ordinary day.
Just trying to get by.
Just a boy,
Just an ordinary boy.
But he was looking to the sky.
And as he asked if I would come along
I started to realize
That everyday you find
Just what he's looking for,
Like a shooting star he shines.
...
He said take my hand,
Live while you can
Don't you see your dreams lie right in the palm of your hand
...
And as he spoke, he spoke ordinary words
Although they did not feel
For I felt what I had not felt before
You'd swear those words could heal.
And as I looked up into those eyes
His vision borrows mine.
And I know he's no stranger,
For I feel I've held him for all of time.

lyrics and music by: Vanessa Carlton
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Critique by ~JohnDent Jul 9, 2009, 5:44:25 AM

Very nice atmosphere of an "ordinary day". I like very much the capture of the human silhouettes and the perspective of the image. The steam in front gives to the whole photograph a very dreamy effect and is in my opinion the strong point of the picture. A sharp image would not be as strong as this...
My only dislike is the big black 1/3 on the top of the image (probably a bridge). I think a lower angle of the camera would give more depth to the photo and the steam would look even more ghosty.
Overall a very good photo, dreamy and unsual...

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